(Explanation: This Fable satirizes weekend homework)
Tired of an abusive lion, and having to build houses for other animals and other hard labor all day, a pack of animal students leave their homes and want to leave free without worries. This pack of animal students consisted of a few small animals; a dog ,chicken, tiger, and a pig. Naturally the tiger being the biggest and strongest assigned himself as the leader of the pack.They had left because they were just tired of the mean old lion , the teacher , he would make them build houses and other hard tasks to prove their skills. Everyday they had the same routine and what was worse is that he gave them building tasks when it was their "family time" or their free time.
The animals went to a farm right outside of town. In this farm the tiger told the animals how to behave and what to do. Although the tiger was very nice with everyone else , he would sometimes try to act like an absolute monarch and control everyone. Besides that for the few weeks they were there everyone was happy and having fun. No one had to much work or any hard labor like when they were with The old lion. The dog liked the tiger a lot and was very polite and respected the tigers strength and power, but the chicken felt very threatened by him and his enormous size put next to the chicken. although the chicken did not like the tiger and the dog was inspired and liked him , the pig was neutral and said he wouldn't mind which side to pick.
Eventually , after weeks passed the freedom and liberty the animals had this time while they were away from the old lion faded away because of the tiger. The tiger had become into what the animals had ran away from. He was very strict and tried to teach them a lot. he would make them build houses for each other , and also got rid of the new "family time" or free time they had. The tiger was exactly like The old lion which was very ironic. The animals would even sarcastically say," how about we do what we did when we were stuck with The old lion, runaway?". After all that happened , the pack of animals finally convinced the tiger that it was best for all of them to go back to the old town and old lion; there old teacher.
Finally after coming back to the old lion the animals realized that they shouldn't avoid work and procrastinate. Hence, the animals learned that they should always work harder and more efficiently and not wait until the last moment. All these factors would help time go by faster and seem much easier. Another thing they agreed on was not to argue about dumb little concepts that were no big issues. So the animals lived many years with there old teacher the old lion and enjoyed the rest of their lives.
Nice story! I like how it ended with them returning to the old lion understanding how to better handle things. I wonder if any of your characters represent someone in real life...? XD
ReplyDeleteHaha very creative idea for a fable!! When you said the animals would even sarcastically say how about we do what we did when we were stuck with the old lion, runaway? There should be a capatalize T and you forgot the "-" around the sentence.
ReplyDeleteVery good story. In this sentence "the pig was neutral and said he wouldn't mine which side to pick." did you mean to write mind instead of mine. Other than this it is a very good fable.
ReplyDeleteGreat topic to write your fable on! I liked the lesson the animals learned. Just a few little grammar and punctuation errors, other then that, good job!
ReplyDeleteGood fable and good topic to write about, but I think it would be better if some dialogue was used.
ReplyDeleteI like the lesson they learn, and it leads to a long and happy life!
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