Monday, November 7, 2011

JOHN’S DECLERATION FROM SOCIETY


       The cruel society that we live in is corrupt and is based upon three very important things according to the government . We can all live better and do what we would want to if we got rid of this society.  This society has taught us that the three most important things in our boring, dull, plain lives are soma, sex, and consumption. The government thinks that by putting all of these ideas in our heads well do whatever they command us to do well I say no more! All the society has done is made our lives worse, they only tell us to do things that they will benefit of like consumption. Exploiting there power over all of us and all of the small children. The nonsense and rubbish being brain washed into the small undeveloped minds of our children, that can’t even tell the difference between what is good and what is not.
            Consumption is very important to our society in that it helps advocate or stable economy. I personally think that it’s bad and unimportant to our lives. Come on people we don’t need this , imagine how it would be without all these bad rules .Well I bet it would be a lot much more fun and we would all enjoy it honestly. Throughout time we have lost the old ways our people use to live, like Shakespeare, when he lived everything wasn’t just nonsense and dumb ideas or concepts. Everything would be fully thought out.
            In this “advanced” society we live in people can barely tell what the difference is between love and lust or the need to have something. For most people in this dumb society love is nothing, sex is just would be a way to enjoy their time with a person. I viewed Lenina as more than a partner I viewed her as a soul mate for eternity, but all she wanted was to interconnect with me and have fun, Not very valuable for her. Well I might not be perfect like this so called civilized society is said to be called, but I can be a good person for her. Sex and soma aren’t needed every day like this government recommends or suggest.
            In conclusion society is corrupted and focused only for the good of the cruel underlying government. Many of these things are unnecessary in a wonderful life.  The government is so weak that they would even brain wash people in hypnopaedia and even small children. This place disgusts me and I hate it now I will have to do whatever to leave such an awful place. I feel as if I am in hell. Without true happiness, love, and freedom I cannot breathe no longer .This society is in need of well help and till then I say adios society. Goodbye world, this is the declaration from society!!  

5 comments:

  1. Victor, I really liked yours. I don't really see allusions, however, I love your use of parallelism.

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  2. Yours shows a lot of emotion, something would John would try to illustrate. Good job, Victor!

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  3. Ethos- "consumption is very important to our society in that it helps advocate or stable economy" ,there ethics of conmsuption
    Pathos-" I feel as if i am in hell" how john is feeling, his emotional connection to the audience
    Logos-" in this "advanced" society we live in people can barely tell what the difference is between love and lust or the need to have something. For most people in this dumb society love is nothing, sex is just would be a way to enjoy their time with a person" its logic what the difference is between love and lust

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